October Girl

You said that life goes on... But what about you? I can't go on if you don't. You can't make me... Force me to sleep, force me to wake. Tell ...

Wow, I really like this. I don't find many grammer errors so I can't exactly tell you you screwed up. Great poem very dramactic and very true. -Max

Hello FA like I said I was bored so I say this... hmm........ It's not that I don't like it for it's I like this very much but. I want ...

*lets out a relief breath* Oh gosh, I thought it was just my computer... nevermind... Thanks Nate. :D

uh-huh 5/10

(Princess) "Yeah, that's right, I saw you. All of you, you all left me." I felt the skin where the injection was close up, taking all the blood with it. ...

(Princess) That damn shot hurt like hell. I grabbed the side of my neck twisting the eraser's arm into the small of it's back braking it. It shrieked in so ...

(Jessica) I had turned into my were-cat form, I knew it kinda hurt Jared that I could do that, but what could I say? He looked down at me and ...

(Jessica) I couldn't help but supress a yawn. I closed my eyes for a moment, "You sure your okay, Tobi?" "Yeah, I'm fine." He said. "Jared do you need me ...

(Jessica) I laughed and proped my hands on my hips and I raised my eybrows. "Riiiight." I said waiting for his response

(Jessica) "Where is it?" I asked, praying he was going to deny it. "Where's what?" Tobi asked. "You know what I'm talking about, where is it?" I asked again.

)(Jessica) I felt like I had an advantage over Tobi sure he was hurt but my foot was still bleeding. He would never catch up to me. (its all yours ...

(Jessica) I jumped off the roof and began for the woods, I knew Tobi and Jared didn't like it when I hunted for fresh blood especially all by myself but ...

So I fell in love... And there's no one to catch me. So I listen for a sound... And it's empty. And I fall to the ground... If you're gonna ...

wow Alice this lyric was so beautiful! I ALMOST cried and usually I hate it when people have that effect on me. This was so good that I'm actually speechless. ...